Directions: Write a letter to a friend of yours to
1. recommend one of your favorite movies and
2. give reasons for your recommendation
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Don’t sign your name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming ” instead. Don’t write the address.
小作文范文:
Dear my friend,
I know you are busy preparing for the Postgraduates’ Entrance Exams, thus you have no time to relax yourself. Recently I have seen a movie entitled Let the Bullets Fly. I strongly recommend that you see it in the coming winter vacation.
The reasons for choosing this movie are as follows. To begin with, this hot film has a very powerful cast. I particularly want to tell you that there are a number of your favorite stars such as Zhou Runfa, Ge You and Jiang Wen. In addition, it has a changeable, legendary and fantastic plot which will always attract your attention from the beginning to the end. Above all, the special action and comic effects are breathtaking and appealing, which caters to your tastes. Finally, it is an instructive film which advocates some virtues.
I am sure you will appreciate this film. Please remember to tell me your true feelings.
2011年的考生大作文可以從養(yǎng)成良好的公共道德去寫,也可以從要保護(hù)我們的公共環(huán)境方面去寫,還可以從考生要養(yǎng)成一定的責(zé)任心去寫。接下來(lái)就要思考出所要寫作的主題詞匯,比如public morality, environmental protection, responsibility of protecting public sanitation等等。這些詞匯都應(yīng)該在今年的大作文里出現(xiàn)。
按照我們課堂上的寫作方法,可以這樣來(lái)展開描述和議論。第一段為傳統(tǒng)的圖畫描述段,根據(jù)圖畫中的具體信息,尤其是下面的文字說(shuō)明,進(jìn)行直接描述。比如可以運(yùn)用我們沖刺課堂上傳授的精彩句型 " Whoever in front of this cartoon/drawing/picture will be greatly impressed. How thought-provoking it seems to be! 或What is vividly illustrated in the painting above is that currently tourists on the boat are continuously throwing away waste bottles into the river, thus destroying or polluting our public environment. (對(duì)漫畫籠統(tǒng)地描述)。然后再補(bǔ)上后面的文字解釋說(shuō)明:“The caption(圖畫中的文字)is indicative of such a phenomenon that a large amount of garbage is left over along the travel/trip. ”屬經(jīng)典的開頭套話。在描述中,不可缺少的主題相關(guān)詞包括" tourists, travel, boat, public environment, ", 等與“公共環(huán)境”或“道德意識(shí)”有關(guān)的詞匯。
第二段要求闡釋漫畫背后所隱藏的深刻社會(huì)意義。在這一段首句可以直接采用" Simply designed as the picture is, the symbolic meaning it conveys is deep and profound. It is, most likely, that the drawer intends not only to present the serious behavior to us but also to set us thinking about its real significance。在句型運(yùn)用方面,可以考慮使用啟航課堂上反復(fù)提到的必殺詞組“The foremost and the most striking influence of it is ….,As is universally acknowledged,和What makes things even worse等。
How impressive the cartoon is in depicting one of the most prevalent social phenomena with regard to protecting natural environment. As is vividly portrayed in the drawing, in the river are floating a number of plastic bottles and cans. Simply designed as the drawing seems to be, the author’s real purpose is to arouse our awareness of environmental protection.
The drawer of this painting is conveying to us a scene of lacking awareness of public environmental protection. In these travelers’ eyes, such careless disposal of garbage need not cause too much people’s worry as well as anxiety. It holds self-evident that these folks lack an essential responsibility of safeguarding sanitation in public.
Listed below are the major causes. For one thing, they contend that public places deserve no attention and effort of sanitary protection. For another, their casual attitude gives rise to the fact that they don’t care about what they are doing to the public areas.
For our part, as civilized citizens of the 21st century, we should take an initiative to protect our public sanitation. Such petty behaviors, though less eye-catching, are as important as those big deeds. If we strive to protect our surroundings, we’ll have a clean and beautiful environment. Only when we pay attention to it can we make our environment cleaner and more beautiful.